Dark Love, a Trinet Poem

Muddy waters
Untamed skies
Did you see the seasons change?
Just when did the sunshine leave?
T’was Yesterday
Again tomorrow
Certainly today

Dark Water
Fading skies
An eternity I wait for you
Lifeless love is in my eyes
Fading now
Starting life
Finished lies

Clear waters
Heavens sky
Look just how times flown by
Back to myself I have arrived
Sun bright
Heart open
Again alive

A Trinet description is found here

21 comments on “Dark Love, a Trinet Poem”

🙂 Hugs Heather. The winds of change are near ❤

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Heather's Starting End on March 27, 2015 at 1:08 pm said:

A bit breezy today, isn’t it? lol!

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- DotedOn on March 27, 2015 at 1:09 pm said:
  
  It’s get better 🙂
  You write beautifully!
  
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- Heather's Starting End on March 27, 2015 at 1:12 pm said:
  
  It was a challenge on poets corner I saw late last night. They are always good because you are then half way there with the form 😉
  
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- DotedOn on March 27, 2015 at 3:37 pm said:
  
  🙂 It sounded so real to me!
  
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Hi Heather,
This is a soulful piece.
Your gorgeous words paint melancholy joy.
AnnMarie
I hope all is well 🙂

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Heather's Starting End on March 27, 2015 at 1:13 pm said:

All good here, my Artist mentor 🙂 Just been laying low for some time now. Trying to find my “you are here” x. lol!

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- AnnMarie Roselli-Kissack on March 27, 2015 at 1:22 pm said:
  
  Glad to hear all is well. Laying low is the best way to find your x on life’s map 🙂 Just make sure after you find that affirming x, you don’t move to the next alphabet letter, because that letter will make you start all over 😉
  AnnMarie 🙂
  Happy Friday, my friend – may x’s of all shapes and sizes be with you!
  
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- Heather's Starting End on March 27, 2015 at 1:29 pm said:
  
  lol! Touché, Dear AnnMarie ❤ Thank you!!!!
  
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- AnnMarie Roselli-Kissack on March 27, 2015 at 1:59 pm said:
  
  😉
  
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Love!
M

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Heather's Starting End on March 29, 2015 at 9:50 am said:

Hi Dicky, Yes, Harry at the Poets Corner will throw a challenge in every now and then. It is fun to see which new styles come easy and which one are much harder than they appear. A nice way to change it up and “grow” a bit with thought/style 🙂 Most welcome!!!

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- dickyjloweman on March 29, 2015 at 1:10 pm said:
  
  I know the site, but I’ll have to get back there more often.
  
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Heather's Starting End on March 29, 2015 at 9:52 am said:

Hi M 🙂 Thanks 🙂 ❤ ❤ ❤

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- Looking for the Light on March 29, 2015 at 4:13 pm said:
  
  I think about you everyday, sending good karma your way.
  M
  
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Thanks for turning me on to this type of poem. I’ve tried to write a few, and for me, it tougher than it looks. Some types come easily, but this kind was not one of them. It’s fun though, however I need quite a bit of practice. Thanks again!

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Heather's Starting End on March 29, 2015 at 9:52 am said:

Sunday Morning and a time change….replied under Look for the Lights comment lol!!!! see above 😉

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Haunting and beautiful. Well done!

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Heather's Starting End on April 2, 2015 at 3:43 pm said:

Thank you SO very much, V. How nice of you to come and have a read 🙂

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- The V-Pub on April 2, 2015 at 6:25 pm said:
  
  You’re welcome. I hope that you don’t mind if I visit here on occasion?
  
  Rob
  
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- Heather's Starting End on April 3, 2015 at 11:06 am said:
  
  How could I mind? 🙂
  
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