No,
The day was not long
T’was not
The season of love
And the Sky
This day
Not abundant with sun
Nothing smelt sweet
The birds were not singing
No music was playing
With melodic meaning
Childrenโs laughter
Did not fill the air
Fields of fresh flowers
Not seen everywhere
The moon was not full
Nor on the rise
No,
Just simply us
On a first love reprise
Were we made our own beauty
We created for us
The prefect illusion
Of passion and lust
We had once
filled pastures
With the flowers in bloom
Where we were the music
That hung under the moon
Just a memory
Of a day
We knew would not last
Just a priceless piece
Of a once
Perfect past
So tenderly Beautiful!
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Thank you, Morgan. It is always so nice to have feedback from someones Work you admire… ๐ Thanks for taking time.
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‘hung under the moon’ I love that line
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๐ Thanks for puting a much needed smile in my Day, Richard ๐
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You’re very welcome
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I love it all, and I have to echo Richard’s mention.
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A wonderful compliment, Thank you!
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Sigh
So sadly beautiful
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Thanks, Darlin…it’s so funny how I can “feel” you ๐
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Right? You write to me. ๐
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Absolutely beautiful, but I don’t see how its of an adult nature, at least not what I would consider adult. Well done tho! Loved it ๐
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Tag testing ๐ Thank you, Hugh ๐
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I was curious how to add actual adult content work without getting in trouble or offending people Maybe that tag is the thing? I think it did ask me a question, lol I only have a couple of somewhat explicit poems and a short story or two, But I have been hesitant to add them here just yet.
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This is so very good
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Thank you, my fellow nature man ๐ !!!!!!
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The next time you’re back in The States, we should go for a hike!
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Or when you get to Switzerland ๐ ! Yes, we will do that!!!
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And where are you, again? And how far to the alps? And how soon until we can make this happen? Seriously, it would be a trip of a lifetime, I’m sure!
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LOL! Good question! ๐ We can reach mountains from a bit over an hour from here ๐
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And will we be needing ropes, crampons, ice tools, sleeping bags, bivies and mountain rescue techniques? Or can I come in my standard sandals and wine filled bota bag?
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