44 comments on “A Love Story

  1. I particularly enjoyed the switch from free verse to a more structured scheme which highlighted the final parting verses. Perhaps this reflects a part of love’s nature? Only clear towards the end when years of hindsight is available for reflection.

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  2. This is lovely and so so true! I especially liked the final lines–drawing it all together into the mystery of love and life. Great match–the sin and the snow! I might even have met them.


  3. A beautiful peice of work indeed. Reads much like a story with a beginning, a middle an end and some reflection on thought. Wonderful writing! Thank You Heather. 🙂

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