Lay, Stay, Pray… A Triquint Poem | The Starting End

Lay, Stay, Pray… A Triquint Poem

Posted by Heather's Starting End on October 31, 2014

Posted in: art, creative writing, life, poem, poetry, poetry challenge. Tagged: bed of roses, love, passion, poems, poetry, relationship, stay by me, Triquint Poem. 2 Comments

A bed of your roses with champagne,
We toss and ignite our game
Here, by me, remain
In loves flame
Lay

As seen in our eyes, our hearts proclaim,
A night without any shame
Here, by me, remain
In loves flame
Stay

Gods gift of passion that we attain
Tomorrow please stay the same
Here, by me, remain
In loves flame
Pray

A great challenge from The Poets Corner. Guidlines for a Triquint can be found here.

2 comments on “Lay, Stay, Pray… A Triquint Poem”

Randstein on November 1, 2014 at 3:36 am said:

Nicely done, Heather! You keep the bar very high.

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dbp49 on December 13, 2014 at 1:56 am said:

A beautiful poem, absolutely lovely. Thank-you very much for teaching me about Triquints, and thanks for the link, which I have bookmarked because it can help to teach me a whole bunch of other things for which I am now deeply indebted to you for. Someday I shall find a way to make it up to you, but for now, keep on writing, and I’ll keep on reading. Merry Christmas.

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