9 comments on “The Waiter

  1. First of all, subject matter aside, this poem has such a natural rhythm to it that I didn’t even realize until I was finished, that I was tapping my toe to it as I read. I love it. It just flows. A little music, and you’ll need a band to play it. πŸ™‚ As for the content, that unfortunately, is a dead on perfect description of my own family when I was a youngster (which is a very long time ago) πŸ˜‰ Hmph, some things just never change I guess.

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    • db, (ironically enough my partners initials), I l always look forward to your responses. You always give me such a great insight, descriptive insight as to how you perceive the poems. I almost hold my breath when I see one come in! It is like getting your test handed back from the teacher and hoping you passed! Thank you!!!!! Hugs, H.

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      • I like commenting on your poetry because your poetry appeals to me, but I’m not really any kind of critic or anything, in fact, I don’t think I believe in critics. Lol. Mainly, I’m just trying to tell you what I like about the wonderful work you do. Keep on writing. πŸ™‚

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  2. One day it became popular to be served. We forgot how to show love. Your poem is a reminder of what we have lost and what we have gained. Have a lovely week Heather. πŸ™‚

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