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The Dividing Line

Posted by Heather's Starting End on March 31, 2015

Posted in: awareness, life, poems, poetry, writing. Tagged: aging, awareness poem, Buddhism, dawn, inspiration, learn life, life, life poem, live in the now, poems, poetry, sunrise, sunset. 22 Comments

It’s the time
When the moon,
Gives its way,
To the rising sun

A brief moment when…
All is still
And a second when…
All is clear

The dividing line,
Of a past
Not yet to be,
The future

Become caught
In that time
And live life,
As if it is your dawn

22 comments on “The Dividing Line”

Dennis Hudson on March 31, 2015 at 7:14 pm said:

Very nicely worded Heather.

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- Heather's Starting End on March 31, 2015 at 8:43 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Dennis 🙂
  
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Peter Notehelfer on March 31, 2015 at 7:21 pm said:

Beautiful verse for Holy Week . . . Thanks!

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- Heather's Starting End on March 31, 2015 at 8:43 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Peter. Have a beautiful Easter 🙂
  
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Morgan on March 31, 2015 at 8:09 pm said:

Truly Beautiful Heather 🙂

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- Heather's Starting End on March 31, 2015 at 8:45 pm said:
  
  Morgan!!! Thanks ❤
  
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amommasview on March 31, 2015 at 8:12 pm said:

Beautiful…

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- Heather's Starting End on March 31, 2015 at 8:44 pm said:
  
  Thank you ❤
  
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Laine Jensen on April 1, 2015 at 2:35 am said:

A beautiful poem with wise advice – Love this, Heather 🙂

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- Heather's Starting End on April 1, 2015 at 11:55 am said:
  
  Thank you, Laine. I am glad to see you back. I read that you have been busy guest blogging 🙂
  
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russtowne on April 1, 2015 at 6:09 am said:

I love your poem, its message, and the photo. Beautiful!

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- Heather's Starting End on April 1, 2015 at 11:55 am said:
  
  Many thanks, Russ!
  
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mike7sedona on April 1, 2015 at 11:48 am said:

Yes, the moments of dawn are such that you never know its there until it dawns on you and by then its all gone – that explains the fleeting moment when the future flows into the present and merges into the past! The transient nature of time is what makes it so precious from dawn to dusk to dawn – thanks for providing a poetic explanation!

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- Heather's Starting End on April 1, 2015 at 11:54 am said:
  
  A beautiful summarization!!!! I thank YOU for reading and offering me this. This the most wonderful way to begin my day. Your insight is so much appreciated 🙂 Hugs, H.
  
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  - mike7sedona on April 1, 2015 at 1:32 pm said:
    
    You’re welcome! Thanks for the appreciation – actually it’s your lovely poetic creation which auto-elicits such response! :))
    
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  - Heather's Starting End on April 1, 2015 at 1:35 pm said:
    
    🙂
    
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  - mike7sedona on April 1, 2015 at 6:25 pm said:
    
    :))
    
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dickyjloweman on April 1, 2015 at 4:24 pm said:

Very nice.

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Dom DiFrancesco on April 1, 2015 at 11:17 pm said:

Wow, this is terrific…wise words to live by.

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- Heather's Starting End on April 1, 2015 at 11:24 pm said:
  
  MANY thanks ❤
  
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Hugh A Tague on April 5, 2015 at 6:51 pm said:

Well done!
Happy Easter Sweet Poetess ❤

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ThePower&TheG on April 6, 2015 at 4:37 pm said:

Wonderful – just wonderful

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