“Lost” My First HUITAIN ( I think)…kinda fun to try | The Starting End

“Lost” My First HUITAIN ( I think)…kinda fun to try

Posted by Heather's Starting End on December 12, 2013

Posted in: Uncategorized. Tagged: 8 line Huitain, attempt, challenge, first, fun, poetry, The Arkside of Thought, writing. 3 Comments

Never trust that you won’t forget

the line you memorized last night

The head ready to go but slept

The mind already out of sight

In the morning sun fresh and bright

The poem with the killer start

for all to read with such delight

forgotten now it breaks the heart

Inspired by The Arkside of Thought writing his first Huitain. It took more time than I thought. Fun 🙂

3 comments on ““Lost” My First HUITAIN ( I think)…kinda fun to try”

The Midnight Thief on December 13, 2013 at 4:00 am said:

I must say:
Your Blog is a delight to read
For Poetry like yours
Cannot be found anywhere
(gave it a shot)

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- Swiss-Ami-Mom on December 13, 2013 at 4:03 am said:
  
  That’s a pretty good shot! And a massive compliment! You’d appreciate that where I am, the moon has been out for hours already 😉 So there is the connection!!!!
  
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  - The Midnight Thief on December 13, 2013 at 4:10 am said:
    
    Jealous in a way, the moon just came out like an hour ago over here. And, I’ll add, it’s a big connection! 😀
    
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